關(guān)于托�？荚囎魑南嘈糯蠹叶假I(mǎi)了不少參考書(shū)，并且背誦了不少好段子，但是有的考生依舊作文不理想，究其原因在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可能不太在意，好了，讓我們看看專(zhuān)家怎么評(píng)點(diǎn)TOEFL考試作文的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤的……

    1.結(jié)構(gòu)不平行例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.當(dāng)使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯(lián)接起來(lái)的時(shí)候，應(yīng)當(dāng)使用詞性相同或同一類(lèi)型的短語(yǔ)。

    2.不知所云例：Many companies began using computers mouth.

    3.段落過(guò)長(zhǎng)，不分段主語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞一致問(wèn)題She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主語(yǔ)和動(dòng)詞在數(shù)方面不一致。

    4.句子別扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辭過(guò)長(zhǎng)或不清。換言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑。

    5.不要使用縮寫(xiě)在正式的寫(xiě)作中不要使用縮寫(xiě)形式（can‘t，don’t，it‘s，we’ll，they‘ve等等），而應(yīng)當(dāng)使用單詞的完整形式（cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等）。

    6.關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)重復(fù)Since I want to go to a good school， therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在該句的主要主語(yǔ)和主要?jiǎng)釉~前使用連詞。

    7.句子不完整Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to getsintoscollege. For example， my friend in high school.句子沒(méi)有主要主語(yǔ)或主要?jiǎng)釉~，因?yàn)槠鋵?shí)它應(yīng)是一個(gè)從句。這是一個(gè)非常常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤，修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來(lái)。

    8.不要使用get When I got home， I got tired， so I got a book and gotsintosbed. Get太不正式，意思也過(guò)于含糊，不適合用在正式的場(chǎng)合。應(yīng)將get改為一個(gè)更加具體的單詞，如become， receive， find， achieve，等等。

    9.書(shū)寫(xiě)難以辨認(rèn)信息不正確I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.傳的信息不正確，或者讓人聽(tīng)起來(lái)覺(jué)得可能不正確（如果確實(shí)是正確的，應(yīng)當(dāng)解釋為什么這樣，因?yàn)樽x者不認(rèn)為是正確的）。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百；我們不能絕對(duì)地說(shuō)每一件新東西都是從美國(guó)誕生的。為保險(xiǎn)起見(jiàn)，應(yīng)當(dāng)使用many或most.非英語(yǔ)單詞Computers are very helpful and advantageable.盡管看起來(lái)象個(gè)單詞，其實(shí)不是，至少不是個(gè)英文單詞。使用這個(gè)單詞的另一種形式。

    10.介詞多余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US， I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class， my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示這種意思時(shí)此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見(jiàn)于downtown，home，there，here等詞。這些詞語(yǔ)在英語(yǔ)中是副詞而非名詞，因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。

    11.跑題或不相關(guān)There are many reasons to buy a car， preferably a nice car.這個(gè)意思與文章的主題無(wú)關(guān)。

    12.陳詞濫調(diào)It is okay for children to fail sometimes.所表達(dá)的意思很普通大多數(shù)人都已經(jīng)知道到了，因而就沒(méi)有必要再說(shuō)出來(lái)。

    13.標(biāo)點(diǎn)問(wèn)題I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.這是一個(gè)非常普遍的問(wèn)題！許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號(hào)，尤其是當(dāng)他們用手寫(xiě)的時(shí)候。

    14.重復(fù)冗余Personally， I believe what the newspaper prints.一種意思的表述不止一次，或者某個(gè)詞語(yǔ)不必要。

    15.單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù)Many year ago， dinosaur roamed the Earths.單詞需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)，或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單獨(dú)使用，應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞（a， the， my， his， her， Gary‘s， no， any， 1， 3， 50， most，等等）。

    16.拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)有問(wèn)題I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問(wèn)題　缺少主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)，或者這些成分重復(fù)。

    17.語(yǔ)氣與文章不符I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris， London， Tokyo， and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.語(yǔ)氣與文章其他部分不相符可能是過(guò)于正式或者太不正式。

    18.代詞指代不明If people do not speak the same language， it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代詞所指代的指示詞（介詞所代替的名詞）不清楚。

    19.過(guò)于籠統(tǒng)We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.　句子或它所表達(dá)的意思過(guò)于籠統(tǒng)，不能提供多少信息。

    20.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)不正確檢查一下是應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過(guò)去時(shí)、將來(lái)時(shí)還是完成時(shí)等等。

    21.選詞不恰當(dāng)I was late getting home because I lost my way.在這種情況下不應(yīng)該使用該詞可選擇更好的詞語(yǔ)或者所使用的詞語(yǔ)與文章的總體語(yǔ)氣不符。

    22.單詞形式不當(dāng)I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.所使用的單詞的形式不正確檢查一下應(yīng)該使用該詞的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種。

    23.用詞錯(cuò)誤Even I don‘t speak Spanish， I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.用詞錯(cuò)誤或在此種情況下該詞不是最佳用詞。

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