第一部分 寫作——特訓(xùn)練習(xí)與范文
訓(xùn)練一
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Graduates Work as Village Officials. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 你是否認為大學(xué)生當(dāng)村官是個好主意;
2. 大學(xué)生能給鄉(xiāng)村提供些什么;
3. 大學(xué)生能從村官職位中獲得什么。
College Graduates Work as Village Officials
訓(xùn)練二
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Continuing Education. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)上圖為某城市2002-2008年參加繼續(xù)教育的人數(shù)情況,請描述其中的變化;
2)分析導(dǎo)致該變化的原因;
3)談?wù)勀銓^續(xù)教育的看法。
訓(xùn)練三
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Water Shortage. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 水資源短缺已成為嚴(yán)重問題;
2. 造成水資源短缺的原因;
3. 提出解決方案。
On Water Shortage
答案與解析
訓(xùn)練一
【范文】
College Graduates Work as Village Officials
Nowadays many college graduates choose to work as village officials in the remote areas. To this, people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view while others are against it. As far as I am concerned, I believe that it is a wise choice.
Above all, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. First, they can apply their professional knowledge there. Secondly, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside and speed the development of rural culture. As a result, the gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged. In addition, these graduates can benefit a lot from working as village officials. While too many college graduates are fighting for the handful of positions in big cities, these graduates can find themselves a wider stage of development and realize their value.
Therefore, college graduates working as village officials is a win-win choice and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside.
【點評】
文章描述大學(xué)生當(dāng)村官這一現(xiàn)象,并分析其帶來的諸多好處。第二段運用Above all, in addition, 引出了兩點好處,在使用First, Secondly將第一點好處細化,這樣使文章層次清晰。本文使用了一些精彩的語言,使文章增色不少,例如:contribute a lot to,speed the development,a win-win choice等等。
訓(xùn)練二
【范文】
A Boom in Continuing Education
From the graph, we can learn the number of continuing education participants has kept increasing from 2002 to 2008 in X city. In 2002 there were only 20 thousand people taking part in the continuing education, but in 2004 the number grew to 70 thousand, and in 2006 150, and by 2008, the number has reached 230 thousand. It can be seen easily that continuing education is gaining more and more popularity.
The following reasons are responsible for this boom in continuing education. Firstly, during the work many people begin to realize what they have learned in schools is far from enough. So they turn to continuing education to gain more knowledge and skills. Moreover, as the science and technology in China are developing very fast, adults after graduation have to refresh themselves. In addition, in modern society, those without bachelor's degrees or above are less competitive.
As far as I am concerned, the boom in continuing education is a necessity. It provides those on-the-job people with chances to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge. As our society develops, more and more people will receive continuing education in the future.
【點評】
文章提綱式圖表作文。第一段對圖表反映數(shù)據(jù)進行介紹。第二段運用The following reasons are responsible for順勢提出這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因。第三段作者用As far as I am concerned提出自己的觀點,使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明。
本文使用了描述數(shù)量的詞匯increasing from …to …, grew to …,reached 以及In addition,provides … with…, to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge等一些精彩的語言,成為文章亮點。
訓(xùn)練三
【范文】
On Water Shortage
No one can have failed to notice the fact that water shortage is a grave problem with which the whole world is confronted. Actually, it has become so widespread that it has severely affected people’s daily life and hindered the development of the global economy.
A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following might be the critical ones. To begin with, with the development of agriculture and industry, an increasing amount of water is needed. In addition, the ever-increasing population is another leading cause of water shortage. Besides, the global tendency of warming up also contributes to the problem. What’s worse, pollution and waste of fresh water aggravate the situation.
In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to protect water resources. Secondly, people should enhance their awareness of saving water. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.
【點評】
文章以描述人類面臨水資源匱乏問題進入主題并且對人們的生活造成影響,逐步引伸到造成水資源匱乏的原因,最后提出解決措施進行展望。文章內(nèi)容符合提綱要求,并且文章使用so…that…;it is essential that +虛擬語氣等句式,以及account for,ever-increasing,contributes to,In view of 等詞匯的使用顯示出考生的語言功底。另外,第二段to begin with, in addition和第三段First, Secondly的使用使論述層次清晰。 |