2015高考英語作文寫作技巧:典型錯(cuò)誤及對(duì)策(3)
【重復(fù)累贅】
累贅句：I can speak fluent English fluently.
簡(jiǎn)潔句：I can speak fluent English. I can speak English fluently.
累贅句：Just as the saying goes"every coin has two sides,"it is the same with the private cars, that is to say, It has its disadvantages.
簡(jiǎn)潔句：Just as the saying goes, "every coins has two sides,"so does the private cars.或 Every coin has two sides, so does the private cars.
對(duì)策：英語有一個(gè)原則叫簡(jiǎn)潔原則(又叫經(jīng)濟(jì)原則)--能用三詞不用四詞。平時(shí)進(jìn)行長(zhǎng)句
短寫訓(xùn)練，學(xué)會(huì)用省略的方法使句子簡(jiǎn)潔明了。寫作完成后，要認(rèn)真檢查，看有無重復(fù)累贅句。
【句式結(jié)構(gòu)單一，無連接詞】
結(jié)構(gòu)單一句：I'm Li Hua. I'm a middle school student. I'm from China.
修改句：I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.
結(jié)構(gòu)單一句：You practice more reading, you will improve your reading ability.
修改句：If you practice more reading, you will improve your reading ability.
對(duì)策：學(xué)會(huì)恰當(dāng)使用連接詞、同位語、非謂語動(dòng)詞、短語等對(duì)結(jié)構(gòu)單一的英語句子進(jìn)行合并，進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句的轉(zhuǎn)換訓(xùn)練，逐步掌握較復(fù)雜句式。
【"高級(jí)表達(dá)"誤區(qū)現(xiàn)象】
過多使用所謂的"高級(jí)詞匯"、"高級(jí)語法結(jié)構(gòu)"如：
For so many years'tough studying, I have conquered English. I totally master English. I can speak magnificent English. And I want to make my voice be widely heard throughout the world. So I want to take part in your summer camp.
剖析：考生雖然很認(rèn)真地使用了"高級(jí)詞匯"：tough，conquer，master，magnificent等，但因?yàn)椴粔蚝?jiǎn)潔準(zhǔn)確，有的用詞也不符合中學(xué)生的身份，反而使語言啰嗦，晦澀難懂。
修改：I've been learning English for many years, and I speak fluent English now. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries something about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a mem ber of your summer camp.
又如：I strongly hope that this plan should be carried out continually not only because it has given us more space to develop our critical thinking and independent ability but also because we really feel much happier than ever before.
剖析：該句用詞 39 個(gè)，包含了一個(gè)賓語從句，兩個(gè)狀語從句，太冗長(zhǎng)。
拆分修改：I strongly hope that this plan should be carried out continually because it has allowed us more space to develop our critical thinking and independent ability. What's more, we really feel much happier than ever before.(一個(gè)主從復(fù)合句、一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，連接詞使句子流暢連貫)
對(duì)策：使用詞匯、語法結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)該簡(jiǎn)潔、準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng)、通俗易懂，少用生僻詞，不要為了所謂的"高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)"而牽強(qiáng)使用，走出所謂"高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)"的誤區(qū)。對(duì)于冗長(zhǎng)啰嗦的長(zhǎng)句子可運(yùn)用拆分省略法，使其簡(jiǎn)潔有力。
總之，只要我們針對(duì)高考英語書面表達(dá)中的典型錯(cuò)誤，采取必要的對(duì)策，在老師的指導(dǎo)下扎實(shí)訓(xùn)練，高考中有針對(duì)性的檢查糾正，就一定能夠降低出錯(cuò)率，提高得分檔次，增加高考獲勝籌碼。
(責(zé)任編輯：盧雁明)
特別說明：由于各省份高考政策等信息的不斷調(diào)整與變化，育路高考網(wǎng)所提供的所有考試信息僅供考生及家長(zhǎng)參考，敬請(qǐng)考生及家長(zhǎng)以權(quán)威部門公布的正式信息為準(zhǔn)。
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