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　　Cooperation

　　No one can have failed to notice the fact that the cooperation is playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. Without the agreement and cooperation between persons and persons, persons and groups or groups and groups, we can not accomplish what we need to do. Many efforts would prove in vain.

　　Let’s take a football game for example. Cooperation will make them confidence and success. During the game, one team is competing against the other, but each member of the team must cooperate with his teammates. Otherwise, they would lose the game no matter how skillful each individual player might be. This reveals the significant of the team work. Undoubtedly, in our society, hardly can anyone succeed in his career or study without team work.

　　On the basic of the analysis above and those I have not ever mentioned. As far as I am concerned, I claim that team word is essential if we want to make any great achievement. A hopeful and brilliant full future will be on the corner when all of us are cooperate with each other.

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　　文章結構合理，內容充實，語言比較流暢，不失為一篇好作文，但是由于出現(xiàn)了一些細節(jié)的語法和語言表達失誤，所以整體質量有所下降。一定要注意啊。加油啊。