如何寫(xiě)出正確的英文好句?

　　每年都有很多考生問(wèn)老師，怎么提高寫(xiě)作?除了閱讀，考研英語(yǔ)中占分值比較大的就是寫(xiě)作。對(duì)于各位考研學(xué)子，大家無(wú)論學(xué)習(xí)閱讀還是寫(xiě)作，首先要弄清楚一個(gè)問(wèn)題，什么叫做好句子?

　　好句子絕不僅僅是把主謂賓或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特點(diǎn)。如果同學(xué)們能夠把握這些特點(diǎn)，那么相信大家一定能夠提升作文句式的表達(dá)。下面萬(wàn)學(xué)海文英語(yǔ)老師跟大家分享一下好句子的特點(diǎn)。

　　特點(diǎn)一：整體性

　　句子的整體性：即能表達(dá)單獨(dú)的、完整的思想。

　　Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

　　【分析】這個(gè)句子表達(dá)了兩層思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn) 2. grew up to be a musician.長(zhǎng)大成為了音樂(lè)家。這個(gè)句子應(yīng)該分成兩句來(lái)寫(xiě)。除此之外，還需要增加一些信息來(lái)連接兩層思想。

　　【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

　　特點(diǎn)二：連貫性

　　句子的連貫性：即能清晰地連接句子的各個(gè)部分，沒(méi)有虛假的平行結(jié)構(gòu)，沒(méi)有指代不請(qǐng)的代詞，沒(méi)有不清晰的句內(nèi)關(guān)系。

　　Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, “good morning!”

　　【分析】這個(gè)句子從語(yǔ)法來(lái)講是正確的，但是句內(nèi)關(guān)系不清楚，到底誰(shuí)進(jìn)入了教室?

　　【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, “good morning!”

　　Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

　　【分析】這個(gè)句子的連貫性較差，可以利用平行結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)體現(xiàn)連貫性。

　　【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

　　特點(diǎn)三：準(zhǔn)確性

　　句子的準(zhǔn)確性指句子內(nèi)部沒(méi)有不準(zhǔn)確的，不必要的詞。

　　Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

　　【分析】這個(gè)句子感覺(jué)有故意寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)之嫌，需要精簡(jiǎn)。

　　【提升】He returned in early August.

　　特點(diǎn)四：重點(diǎn)突出

　　好的句子應(yīng)該重點(diǎn)突出，詞的選擇，詞的重復(fù)都有助于句子的重點(diǎn)突出。

　　Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, “don’t move!”

　　【分析】這個(gè)句子比較平淡，可以修改一下動(dòng)詞。

　　【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, “don’t move!”

　　特點(diǎn)五：語(yǔ)法正確，句式多變

　　句式多變指句子長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合。如果全篇都是復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)難句，文章讀起來(lái)會(huì)晦澀難懂，并且有挑釁閱卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感覺(jué)有侮辱閱卷人之感。

　　Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

　　【分析】這個(gè)句子不僅僅存在語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題，另外還有完整性，準(zhǔn)確性問(wèn)題。

　　【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

　　如果同學(xué)們?cè)趯?xiě)句子的時(shí)候，注意以上五點(diǎn)，相信大家一定能夠?qū)懗稣�確，完整，準(zhǔn)確的英文句子。