又一次是成功話題，地球人再也阻擋不住出題人踏向成功的腳步了!今年的三大考試四六級和考研都不約而同的考到了個人成長和成功話題，出題人堅定的腳步一定會帶給我們成功的結(jié)果的!這也是我在課堂上所講到過的人生哲理的問題;在我的《何凱文寫作高分攻略》一書中也專門羅列出了大量關(guān)于個人成長成功的句子(詳見56頁)，當(dāng)然這次的作文再次印證了我們不能只靠所謂的模板，而應(yīng)該打破模板，將模和板相分離，模是指寫作的框架，而板是里面的句子是可以替換的平時所積累一些句子;

　　現(xiàn)在我們就用我們平時講過的句子來寫這篇作文：

　　首先第一段是圖畫的描述：

　　第一段第一句推薦是開門見山不需要多余的句子，無論多牛的開頭句放在開頭老師都知道不是你自己寫的，都會覺得你是在“騙字?jǐn)?shù)”所以推薦的寫法就是：

　　As is shown above,

　　接著描述圖畫的中心事物，按照我們的老方法用主系表倒裝為表系主的方法

　　in the middle of the picture stands two persons ,

　　接下來描述兩個人共同的動作，用非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　looking at the broken wine bottle,showing different reactions,

　　在用獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)描述兩人分別的動作：

　　one signing that “there is nothing left”, and the other being grateful that “there is something left”.

　　比較后一句結(jié)尾，這里可以隨便從何凱文考研作文高分攻略一書的54頁中任意挑出一句：

　　Simple as the picture is, a certain informative meaning is revealed in it.

　　第二段的作用是論述：

　　第一句需要點出論題是什么：

　　The picture demonstrates two strikingly different attitudes, pessimism and optimism, when facing the same thing and tells us that the enthusiasm and the optimism are of paramount importance when it comes to the personal growth,especially in this ever rapid changing modern society.

　　第二句表明人們的態(tài)度：

　　Due attention to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society.

　　第三句開始進(jìn)入平行展開法就是句子的堆砌：

　　Those with optimistic attitude to the life can relieve not only pressure, but also anxiety and such problems as depression and solitude.

　　Favorable attitude to the life can broaden our mind, enrich our experience and enhance our vigor then creat an enthusiastic environment for our socity.

　　People with the spirit of optimism can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status.

　　以上句子來自何凱文作文高分攻略必背句子。

　　當(dāng)然你還可以舉例：

　　Take Hery Ford, a great American industrialist , the creator of the “motor age”, who adheres to the belief for his life time that good attitude renders successful life and career, for instance. It is optimism that helps him achive his glorious accomplishment in the manufacture industry and fulfills his dream to build the car for ordinary working people.

　　(以上來自何凱文QQ空間終極預(yù)測)

　　比較后一句：

　　Were there no positive mental attitude, never would we taste the real happiness of the success.

　　第三段的寫作就是句子的堆砌和呼應(yīng)觀點：

　　To sum up, one’s view and attitude on his life determines his future. Different life attitude may bring about entirely different results Many psycholigically fragile and pessimistic young people around us too easily become discouraged and give up when comfronting with difficulties , which makes it hard to believe those youngsters with such mind state can face the challenge and become pillars of the society.

　　(以上所有句子來自何凱文考研英語高分攻略104頁)(或者)

　　The picture enlightens us becoming more appreciative of the meaning of life and its permanent spiritual values. Life is ten percent what you make it and ninety percent how you take it. The value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them. So having the pisitive attitude in life is very important for us, especially youngsters. (流氓段)

　　(以上段落來自何凱文作文預(yù)測講義第三頁)

　　完整參考范文：

　　As is shown above, in the middle of the picture stands two persons , looking at the broken wine bottle,showing different reactions, one signing that “there is nothing left”, and the other being grateful that “there is something left”. Simple as the picture is, a certain informative information is revealed in it.

　　(KK三步描述法)

　　The picture demonstrates two strikingly different attitudes, pessimism and optimism, when facing the same thing and tells us that the enthusiasm and the optimism are of paramount importance when it comes to the personal growth,especially in this ever rapid changing modern society. Due attention to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society. Those with optimistic attitude to the life can relieve not only pressure, but also anxiety and such problems as depression and solitude. Favorable attitude to the life can broaden our mind, enrich our experience and enhance our vigor then creat an enthusiastic environment for our socity. People with the spirit of optimism can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status. Were there no positive mental attitude, never would we taste the real happiness of the success.

　　(所有的句子均來自何凱文考研英語高分攻略55和56頁)

　　To sum up, one’s view and attitude on his life determines his future. Different life attitude may bring about entirely different results Many psycholigically fragile and pessimistic young people around us too easily become discouraged and give up when comfronting with difficulties , which makes it hard to believe those youngsters with such mind state can face the challenge and become pillars of the society. (或者)

　　(以上所有句子來自何凱文考研英語高分攻略104頁)

　　The picture enlightens us becoming more appreciative of the meaning of life and its permanent spiritual values. Life is ten percent what you make it and ninety percent how you take it. The value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them. So having the pisitive attitude in life is very important for us, especially youngsters. (流氓段)

　　(以上段落來自何凱文作文預(yù)測講義第三頁)