City  Problems    

　　Nowaday, with the rapid development of the society, an ancreasing number of people are puring into big cities. This bring us many problems and make a big influence on people’s work and living.

　　It is not difficult for us to come up with some problems that can be listed as follows. To begin with, it bring us the housing problem. Because the price of house in big cities increases rapidly, many people have no enough money to buy house and people’s living standard goes from bad to worse. In addition, the education faces with a great pressure. And finally, there are more and more traffic jam.

　　Based on what has been discussed above, I believe that it is hight time for us to take effective measures to deal with these problems. On the one hand, the gowernment should invest more money in improving the base constructure in big cities. On the other hand, small cities should take steps to abstract people. I believe, only we work hard, will we have a bright future.

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