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同等學力英語作文批改:第86期

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  同等學力英語作文原文

  Due to the policy of reform and opning-up,the nation economy han been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decaes.An increasing number of people infuxing into big citys with which some problems are arising.

  The following problems are the most critical ones.In the first place,the more and more people result in the rapidly increasing price of goods and services.In the othere place,too many cars on the road easily lead to traffick jams which affect peoples, life quality.Last but not least ,people are hard to find suitable work which increase unsafe factors,
 
  In view of seriousness of the problem, I believe that effective measures must be taken before things get worse,On the one hand,it is essential that laws and regulations be formulated and enforced to ban over human rushing into large citys.On the other hand,people shoud enhance their awareness of going out to seek ideal place in the society,With these measures taken,it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.

  點評:9分

  文章基本符合題目要求,內(nèi)容比較充實,但是由于出現(xiàn)了些語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤導致整體質(zhì)量下降,今后復習中一定要注意這些細節(jié)的復習,加油啊。

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