結(jié)尾
結(jié)尾部分的主要功能在于呼應(yīng)主題，使得文章有完整性。至于結(jié)尾的方法，多數(shù)寫作教材都有說明，這里不再多說。但有一點(diǎn)還要提醒大家，結(jié)尾中該說清楚的還是要說清楚的。比如willingking的結(jié)尾沒有提出每種辦法的回報(bào)會(huì)體現(xiàn)在什么地方，因而結(jié)尾在細(xì)節(jié)方面不太成功。
As is shown in the picture above, a hand is tightly glued to a computer mouse linked to a personal computer by an iron chain. Clearly, the iron chain stands for the control of the computer over the person who indulges himself in the cyberspace. An implication from the picture can be figured out that the personal computer, a high-tech device originally created for saving time and energy so as to benefit humankind, ironically turns out to be a gadget murdering the time and energy of quite some people.
The personal computer worthlessly consumes the time of those addicted to it. A survey shows the average time spent on it of those addicted amounts to 16 hours a day. And the minimum continuous time spent on the personal computer is 12 hours, while the maximum soars surprisingly to 168 hour-a whole week! Needlessly to say, the computer has eaten up their time for work, for sports and, worse still, their precious time for rest-an natural activity for refreshment to keep the body functioning normally.
The personal computer has also depleted their vigor. They survey finds almost all those computer freaks feel sluggish in their jobs as a result of staying too long before the computer. They also have lost their enthusiasms for outdoor activities. Some even become so feeble that they sweat when standing for a short while. It seems that they are being burned out by the high-tech monster.
The sole way for the addicts to restore the proper use of the computer relies on themselves. Only when they have a sound recognition that the computer is but a tool to facilitate their life instead of their master can they develop their self-control. If they can limit their time on using the computer within 6 hours a day, their life will be freed from the trap of the computer and will return to its track.
當(dāng)然，這篇文章這樣寫還是有“小兒科”之嫌。只不過是將一篇短文寫得有點(diǎn)像而已。如果真要寫有關(guān)這一話題的文章，肯定是不會(huì)這樣寫的。比如，可以去人們耽溺于電腦空間的心理原因。然而如果那樣來寫，恐怕會(huì)寫得很復(fù)雜，不是一篇入門短文的能容納的。 |
