十句作文法是由有關(guān)專家總結(jié)出來的一種高分作文方法,考生在經(jīng)過短期訓(xùn)練之后便可較大幅度地提高成績。為此有必要向考生加以介紹,目的是使一些對(duì)作文沒有把握的考生找到一條可行的解決辦法。(參考:蔡基剛《英語考試高分作文》)
需要指出的是所謂十句作文并非一定10句,從很多考生的高分(200詞以下)來分析,句子數(shù)量在8句至12句(依句子長短和結(jié)構(gòu)不同而不同)。如以每個(gè)句子平均10—15個(gè)單詞計(jì)算,便能用8—12個(gè)句子完成一篇要求120—150字的作文。
其基本模式為:
┌─主題句 句 1 第一段─┤ 開頭 └─擴(kuò)展句 句 2 ┌─主題句 句 1 第一段─┤ 正文 ├─擴(kuò)展句 句 2 ├─擴(kuò)展句 句 3 ├─擴(kuò)展句 句 4 ├─擴(kuò)展句 句 5 ├─擴(kuò)展句 句 6 ├─擴(kuò)展句 句 7 ├─擴(kuò)展句 句 8 └─擴(kuò)展句 句 9 第三段 ──結(jié)尾句 句10 結(jié)尾
第一段為開頭,包括兩句。第一句為主題句,必須提出,通過問題點(diǎn)明全文主題;第二句為擴(kuò)展句,須進(jìn)一步說明和支持主題句。或是將關(guān)系倒過來,由第一句說明情況,第二句提出問題。第二段為正文,共七句。第一句(句3)為主題句,提出本段的主題,它應(yīng)與第一段的主題相關(guān)和一致。第二句至第七句(句4一句7)為擴(kuò)展句,說明和支持本段的主題。句與句之間要注意運(yùn)用好過渡使段落邏輯合理,結(jié)構(gòu)得當(dāng)。第三段為結(jié)尾,簡化為一句,也是全文的總結(jié)句,它將前面內(nèi)容總結(jié)為一結(jié)果,表明自己的論點(diǎn)。
三段之間的連接要靈活運(yùn)用“啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合”的連接過渡手段。
例如: Example 1
Television Television presents a vivid world in front of us. (1)(主題句)Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. (2)(擴(kuò)展句) Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life. (3) (主題句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities. (4)(擴(kuò)展句) For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as "The Animal World", and "The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald". (5)(擴(kuò)展句) Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes. (6)(擴(kuò)展句) Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication. (7)(擴(kuò)展句) And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses. (8)(擴(kuò)展句) In short, the effect of TVs educational role is becoming more and more obvious. (9)(擴(kuò)展句) Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV program produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. (10)(總結(jié)句) (全文共165個(gè)詞)
Example 2
Changes in Peoples Diet There have been some changes nowadays in the diet of the Chinese. (1)(主題句) For example, grain, the main food of most people in China, is now playing a less important role, while the consumption of high-nutrition food such as milk, meat has increased. (2) (擴(kuò)展句) The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. (3) (主題句) First,people are much wealthier than before. (4) (擴(kuò)展句) With a higher income, they can afford to buy good foods which, in the past, were rarely seen on the dinner tables of ordinary families. (5) (擴(kuò)展句) Another factor is that people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health. (6) (擴(kuò)展句) Lack of certain amount of meat or milk, for example, will result in poor health. (7) (擴(kuò)展句) Finally, owing to the economic reform, meat and milk,which were scarce in the past, are produced in large quantities. (8) (擴(kuò)展句) For all those reasons, what was formerly called "the basket of vegetables" has become that of varied foods. (9) (擴(kuò)展句) To sum up, insignificant as those changes may seem, they are the signs of the improved economic condition in China, and we believe that as the effort in the modernization movement continues, there will be greater changes in peoples diet in the future. (10)
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