寫作猶如蓋大樓,在蓋好之前需要將原材料準(zhǔn)備好,更重要的是,得有“圖紙”,做到心中有數(shù),下手有料,這樣就可以又快又好地蓋好大樓,那么對(duì)于考研英語(yǔ)作文這棟大樓來說,原材料是什么,“圖紙”又如何繪制呢?別急,聽文都編輯為你一一道來:
原材料:?jiǎn)卧~(大約200個(gè))、句子(10個(gè)),“圖紙”:結(jié)構(gòu)一般為:引入觀點(diǎn)(如果是看圖作文,則在開頭先把圖片描述清楚)——論據(jù)支持——總結(jié);在數(shù)量安排上一般為:開頭第一段3句,第二段用論據(jù)說明觀點(diǎn)大概5句,總結(jié)據(jù)一般為2-3句。有了這樣一個(gè)模版結(jié)構(gòu),我們?cè)诿鎸?duì)作文的時(shí)候就會(huì)知道從哪入手,下手輕重,而不是茫然不知所措。以下是一個(gè)例子,為考生演繹如何用此法快速有效蓋好寫作這棟樓。
【2011年寫作真題】(摘自《2012考研英語(yǔ)寫作秘籍》文都考研命題研究中心)
作文為看圖作文,畫面為:圖畫中間有一只小船,有兩個(gè)游客坐在船上,一邊游覽一邊不停地往河里扔垃圾,附近的河面上漂浮了大量的垃圾,在圖畫下面有四個(gè)漢字:旅游之“余”,意思是旅行時(shí)留下大量的垃圾。
圍繞這一圖畫,我們首先涉及這篇文章的脈絡(luò)及主題思想:1)第一段簡(jiǎn)要描述圖畫內(nèi)容;2)第二段解釋圖畫隱藏的含義,說明旅游業(yè)的發(fā)展對(duì)環(huán)境帶來的負(fù)面影響,破壞了生態(tài)平衡;3)第三段提出解決辦法,一方面呼吁民眾對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)的責(zé)任心,另一方面要確立法規(guī)來規(guī)范旅游業(yè)和游客的行為。有了這一圖紙,我們就可以有條不紊地把大樓蓋好了。
參考范文:
With the rapid development of tourist attractions, a growing number of people throng to the scenic spots during their vocations. As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, in the middle of a lake alive with rubbish rows a boat, riding two tourists, who are littering while enjoying the scenery.
We can deduce from the picture that the drawer is trying to capture our attention to the tragedy of the destruction of the rivers and lakes, which is part of the threat to the ecological balance of the planet. It must be admitted that occurrences of water pollution caused by the rapid development of tourism industry is understood by many people with wide and insightful views. Unfortunately, in real practice, tourism has developed in a manner which often conflicts with the environment. To some extent, the faster the tourism economy develops, the worse the environment becomes.
What is the significance of tourism development if the ecological balance is destroyed? In my view, measures should be taken without any delay to address the problem before price is paid for the negative development of the tourism. What should be done first is to make more people aware of the importance of environment protection. Otherwise,sightseeing, as a relaxation for most city dwellers, would be an impossible-to-be-realized wish in a few years. Meanwhile, related laws must be laid down to protect the fragile environment and to penalize those who violate the law. Only in this way would we enjoy a wonderful natural ecosystem and an advantageous, fast-growing tourism economy.
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