2012考研報道：考后首發(fā)2012年考研真題及答案解析

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　　一、圖畫描述段

　　主要原則：

　　簡單化原則零錯誤原則 純原則 語法結(jié)構(gòu)：定語從句+插入語

　　描述圖畫的形容詞thought-provoking/compelling/profound/instructive/enlightening

　　1.The satirical sketch graphically portrays a scene in which ______________________

　　It is graphically/vividly/symbolically illustrated/demonstrated in the 圖 that___________

　　2.1) What makes the drawing striking/intriguing/compelling is the fact that __________

　　2) The most striking feature of the drawing is (the fact)that ____________________

　　3) As is symbolically depicted in the (first/left-handed)圖，____________________

　　3.其他描寫

　　4.字幕 1) We are informed by the caption that “____________________________”

　　2) The caption reads “___________”/The caption indicates that “___________”

　　5.總結(jié)(不要用太難的表達，把圖總結(jié)即可，不一定需要)

　　Undoubtedly/Unquestionably/Incontrovertibly/Indisputably______________________________

　　三大套路

　　1.Ving的處理

　　1)Standing by the riverside, the Master sighed, “May time pass on and on like this, never ceasing day and night.”

　　2) Fluttering through the air, we dance wing to wing, life after life, forever a pair.

　　2. ADJ+N

　　3. =with+N

　　With passion/difficulty/optimism/confidence/joy/enthusiasm/grief/sorrow…..

　　單圖：2008 合作

　　The impressive and thought-provoking cartoon graphically portrays a moving scene invoving two handicapped men. (Depicted in the thought-provoking cartoon are two handicapped men.) The most striking feature of the drawing is that the two cripples, leaving their crutches behind and supporting each other with their powerful hands, are walking forward with confidence and optimism. In addtion, we are informed by the caption that “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel around the world.”

　　As is illustrated in the thought-provoking cartoon, an optimistic and confident man, taking off his clothes, is rushing toward on a bridge from “poverty” to “prosperity”. What makes the drawing intriguing is that the bridge is entitled/ marked as “reasonable system”. Unquestionably, it is the positive politics that has bridged the gap between the poor and the rich.

　　雙圖：2006 小貝頭

　　As is vividly depicted in the photos above, Beckham, the handsome British football superstar, is enjoying a striking popularity among young people. In the first photo, Beckham’s name appears on a young man’s face. The caption indicates that worship for the idol is written on the face. In the second photo, this young man is doing Beckham’s chic hairstyle in a barbershop. We are informed that he is spending 300 yuan imitating his idol’s hairdo.

　二、闡述段

　　天龍八部 三分天下

　　食品安全問題

　　到底什么是天龍八部? 簡單理解，就是八個可以在第二段當中構(gòu)思的方面。第二段比較好是總分總的夾心式寫法。其中比較比較比較關(guān)鍵的是現(xiàn)狀分析，原因分析和后果分析。注意到，這八個方面是可以構(gòu)思的方面，不是要都寫，都寫的話，這一段一般人過200，高手過1000. P2注意盡量控制在6-7句以內(nèi).

　　1.由淺入深：Simple as the picture is, the connotation behind it should be taken into consideration with more insight and penetration.

　　2.深層含義：Undoubtedly, the purpose of the picture is to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food.

　　3.現(xiàn)狀(羅列除了很多可以參考的寫法)

　　1)The past several years has witnessed/experienced the phenomenon that people in growing/increasing/expanding/mounting numbers suffered from the severe consequence of unsafe food.

　　2)The unprecedented economic development over the past several years is accompanied by the dramatic increase of unsafe food.

　　3)We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk which results in prevalent infant kidney problem, and eggs which contain undesirable chemical factors, all of which are sounding an alarm to our society.

　　4.原因(寫一條就可以，不寫也沒問題，但是要讓文章顯得有深度比較好分析一下原因)

　　1). 人們?yōu)榱俗非罄麧�，而喪失了道德底線

　　2). 國家監(jiān)管不力，相關(guān)法律并未完善，給了不法分子漏洞

　　3). 萬能BT理由，社會壓力巨大。(with the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals.)

　　1)Several factors, both individual and social, could account for the negative phenomenon.

　　2)The reason for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can, to a large extent, ascribe it to the following interrelated factors. (1，2兩句作用相同，都是引出兩條原因。注意沒必要兩條，一條就夠，兩條主要是為了層次感)

　　3)具體的兩條理由，On the one hand, a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally turning a blind eye to /totally ignoring the basic morality of the whole business.

　　On the other hand, our legal system is far from perfect, which directly or indirectly provides the immoral businessmen with the chance of cheating.

　　(*)現(xiàn)狀+原因(單原因)(其中還有象征點的寫法出現(xiàn))

　　The irresponsible teacher depicted in the picture is naturally associated with a great number of professors in real life, who are only in pursuit of their research papers and titles, while totally turning a blind eye to their obligation as qualified educators, for the reason that a great number of colleges and universities regard the number of papers as an essential standard to judge a teacher.

　　5.后果/影響

　　Professional dishonesty not only adversely affects the health condition of numerous consumers, but also poses a probable and potential threat on social stability.

　　壞：1.Adversely affect

　　2.pose a probable and potential threat on

　　3.exert a(n) unfavorable/undesirable/adverse/negative consequence on

　　4.sound an alarm to

　　5. put an enormous pressure upon

　　好：1.Lay a solid foundation for

　　2.exert a(n) positive/favorable/far-reaching/beneficial impact on

　　3.play a(n) vital/crucial/irreplaceable role in

　　4.serve as a catalyst for

　　教授的職責：The indifferent attitude towards education not only undermines the teaching quality of universities and adversely affects students’ desire for knowledge, but also sounds an alarm to education system in contemporary society.

　　Undeniably, this phenomenon will reduce the education quality. And students on the other hand, will have no specific and professional instruction.

　　6.舉例說明 It can be best exemplified by the case of poisonous milk and other dangerous food.(其實就是聯(lián)系實際，也可以說就是現(xiàn)狀的具體體現(xiàn))

　　參考：2006：小貝頭

　　Undoubtedly, the photos have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among the youth nowadays. Beckham represents the image of sport hero whose handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans. Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in The 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked nationwide noisy debates on the value and harm of admiring these idols. Generally speaking, young people are inclined to adore the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.

　　7.層進的修辭手法和轉(zhuǎn)折的運用

　　It is undeniable that we must be honest, which should be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared (advocated) by all the businessmen. Regrettably/However, it is ruthlessly and relentlessly ignored in contemporary society.

　　8.威脅性總結(jié)

　　If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse/ the whole market even the entire society would become unimaginable and uncontrollable/ the whole market even the entire society would become uncurbed.

　　增補：虛擬語氣版：

　　Were the situation to continue, it would become uncontrollable.

　　考研第二段就是以上內(nèi)容的合理整合，加上第一句的論點

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food.

　　和比較后一句的結(jié)論(威脅性總結(jié))If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　中間插入3-4句論據(jù)即可，成為一個夾心式的寫法。一定不能寫太多，第二段控制在5--6句，7句沖頂。

　　版本一 論點+原因+結(jié)論(黑字是第二段首尾，幾個版本都不變，其他是根據(jù)剛才的分析加入的論據(jù))

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. Several factors, both individual and social, could account for the negative phenomenon. On the one hand, a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally ignoring the basic morality of the whole business. On the other hand, our legal system is far from perfect, which directly or indirectly provides the immoral businessmen with the chance of cheating. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　版本二：論點+現(xiàn)狀+層進+結(jié)論

　　頭尾兩句不變

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. The past several years has witnessed/experienced the phenomenon that people in growing numbers suffered from the severe consequence of unsafe food. We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk which results in prevalent infant kidney problem, and eggs which contain undesirable chemical factors. There is no denying the fact that the virtue of honesty should be accepted, appreciated and advocated by all the businessmen. Regrettably, the current situation is incompatible with this ideal concept. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.(比較后一句可省，因為太長了)

　　版本三：論點+后果+結(jié)論

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. Professional dishonesty undoubtedly exerts an adverse consequence on our society. Initially, they adversely affect the health condition of numerous consumers, for the reason that consumers can not easily recognize them. Additionally, fake goods pose a probable and potential threat on our national economy, because/as consumers do not believe the market system. In other words, this phenomenon will undermine the whole business. Finally, we have business with foreign countries. If fake goods are discovered in the overseas trade, it will undoubtedly exert a negative influence on our reputation. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.(比較后一句可省，因為太長了)

　　版本四：論點+現(xiàn)狀+一點原因+一點后果+結(jié)論

　　1) Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. 2)We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk and eggs, because a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally turning a blind eye to the basic morality of the whole business. 3)In other words, professional dishonesty undoubtedly exerts an adverse consequence on our society. 4)If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　1) 是深刻含義; 2)是現(xiàn)狀+一點原因; 3)是后果; 4)是威脅性總結(jié)

　　西部大開發(fā)

　　1. 由淺入深Simple as the picture is, the connotation behind it should be taken into consideration with more insight and penetration.

　　2. 深刻含義Undoubtedly, this picture is thought-provoking, in that it endeavors to convince us that the development of the western part has been a prevalent and pervasive issue.

　　3. 現(xiàn)狀：The past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in growing numbers have participated in the campaign.

　　或：The past several years have witnessed the increasing/soaring passion (enthusiasm) of people to join in the process. 補充：參與/投身于 的其他寫法 be engaged in devote oneself in

　　4. 原因：

　　1) 東西部差異大，東部很多人生活富裕，而西部一些地區(qū)仍然貧窮

　　2) 這是和諧社會共同發(fā)展的需要。

　　3)BT理由，壓力巨大。(稍微改寫下，西部壓力大就可以了)

　　這里暫且寫一條：Some people in the developed areas are leading a luxurious life while in some underdeveloped regions, a great number of people are still living in sheer poverty.

　　5. 影響

　　1)可以有效解決東西部發(fā)展不均衡的問題

　　2)極大提高西部人民的生活水平

　　3)可以提高西部人民的教育文化水平

　　一個詞：深遠!

　　The movement, directly or indirectly, will exert a far-reaching influence on the western areas even the country as a whole. It can not only alleviate (減輕緩和，不會的話換relieve) the poverty of the underdeveloped areas, but also lay a solid foundation for the education level of the region effectively and efficiently.

　　6. 層進 西部大開發(fā)應(yīng)該被accepted, appreciated and advocated.

　　7. 反面論證：要是國家不注意均衡發(fā)展，只顧東部，整個國家就會。

　　Suppose our government does not pay enough attention to the west, our whole country would become unbalanced and unable to survive and thrive (in the ruthless and relentless competition)

　　或者正面總結(jié)：Generally speaking, the phenomenon would continue to exert a beneficial influence on our society, if it is widely accepted, appreciated and advocated.

　　注：本文并未采用舉例說明的論證手段

　　三分天下法：

　　Undoubtedly, the subtle connotation of the picture endeavors to convince us that the development of the western part has been a prevalent and pervasive issue. (論點)The drawing is thought-provoking, in that it contains three layers of profound meaning. (過渡句)Initially, the past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in growing numbers have participated in the campaign. Additionally, some people in the developed areas are leading a luxurious life while in some underdeveloped regions, a great number of people are still living in sheer poverty. Finally, the movement, directly or indirectly, will exert a far-reaching influence on the western areas even the country as a whole. Generally speaking, suppose our government does not pay enough attention to the west, our whole country would become unbalanced and unable to survive and thrive (in the ruthless and relentless competition)(結(jié)論)

　　總共6句話

　　第一句仍然直接說出深層含義(由淺入深的寫法確實是比較弱智)

　　第二句是關(guān)鍵：這是一句過渡句，提示閱卷人，我接下來要分三點來分析這個問題，自己制造這句話，可以避免模板同時還可以提示脈絡(luò)同時還可以順便湊個字數(shù)

　　例句如下：

　　1. This picture is thought-provoking in that it conveys the following three layers of subtle connotations.

　　2. The subtle implication can be analyzed in the following three interrelated aspects.

　　3. In order to derive profound implication from it, we can dissect this enlightening picture in the following three aspects.

　　以上三句話的意思無非就是：考官注意啊，我要寫三點了!

　　然后開始寫自己的1，2，3每點一句話(當然如果你可以多寫幾句也不是問題，控制時間就OK)

　　第三句是第一點，initially/to begin with/first and foremost

　　第四句是第二點，additionally/what’s more/moreover/furthermore

　　第五句是第三點，finally/last but not least

　　至于比較后一句第六句，以前怎么總結(jié)，現(xiàn)在還怎么總結(jié)，注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞Generally speaking。

　2008年：合作

　　【審題構(gòu)思】

　　第一段解析：這是一道單圖題。圖畫中是兩個都只有一條腿的人，丟開了拐杖，互相攙扶著往前走。 文字說明：“你一條腿，我一條腿;你我一起，走南闖北。” 根據(jù)我們課堂的講解，單圖題第一段寫3句。圖畫描述應(yīng)有兩句，挖掘兩個可寫點，串成兩句簡單描述即可。比較后一句可以對圖畫進行挖掘后總結(jié)，比如“他們有了互相的幫助，自信而樂觀的迎接著挑戰(zhàn)”(Undoubtedly, with each other’s help, they are embracing the upcoming challenges with confidence and optimism) 也可以對文字說明進行簡單翻譯，也就是我們課堂解釋過的The caption reads/indicates,或者We are informed by the caption that “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel around the world.” 比較后一句還可以簡單發(fā)表評論，說明合作的重要性，但第一段始終是描述段，對深刻含義的評論不宜過多，一句即可，否則跑題。

　　不少考生反映，這一段比較難的寫的是“拐杖”這個詞語。Crutch 對于考研的同學來說屬于極其生僻的詞語，改卷者也明白這個道理。只要你把這個意思表達出來就可以了，我們一直強調(diào)“第一秒寫不出，第二秒換說法”，這里可以寫為Supporting tools/assistant equipment/supporting sticks等等。

　　第二段解析：根據(jù)我們一直講解的“天龍八部”寫法，第二段應(yīng)滿足總分總的寫法(或者是總分)。第一句要點明蘊涵在簡單圖畫中的大道理，作為全段的主題句(論點)，結(jié)尾比較好以Generally speaking之類的關(guān)聯(lián)詞總結(jié)全段(結(jié)論)。中間的論據(jù)我們可以選擇事實和現(xiàn)狀描述，問題背景，原因或后果，層進，舉例說明�？梢苑治霈F(xiàn)代社會合作的原因和必要性，可以描述合作在各個領(lǐng)域里的現(xiàn)狀(如個人層面，企業(yè)層面，社會層面)，可以討論合作的好處，可以聯(lián)系實際，舉例說明合作的重要性。論點一句，論據(jù)4-5句，結(jié)論一句，第二段6-7句。

　　第三段解析：注意到提綱規(guī)定是“comments”。我們曾經(jīng)對這個詞進行過深入分析，水平高的同學可以自己發(fā)表議論，水平一般的人，可以把comments理解為suggestions, 于是回到我們比較熟悉的建議措施段，壞事當然提建議，好事也可以提出建議，使其變得更好。在這一段里，主題句一句，從意義過渡到建議上來;具體評論或措施2句，寫出層次感;總結(jié)加展望未來一句，第三段4句。注意：考研寫作的觀點并無對錯之分，只要不跑題即可。06年可以寫追星的負面意義，也可以正面挖掘積極方面;07年可以寫為自信，也可以寫為挑戰(zhàn)，人生意義。08年的寫作，寫為合作，互相幫助，困難中互相扶持均屬合理。在考研寫作三大要素語言結(jié)構(gòu)思路里，思路始終是次要的。關(guān)鍵是語言基本正確，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，邏輯嚴謹。

　　【參考范文】

　　The impressive and thought-provoking cartoon graphically portrays a moving scene invoving two handicapped men. The most striking feature of the drawing is that the two cripples, leaving their crutches behind and supporting each other with their powerful hands, are walking forward with confidence and optimism. In addtion, we are informed by the caption that “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel around the world.”

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to inform us that due attention has to be paid to the issue of cooperation, which is prevalent and pervasive in contemporary society. On account of the quickening pace of life, unprecedented competition in all walks of life makes it difficult for a single individual to finish an arduous task all by himself. The past several years have witnessed the increase of collaboration both academically and professionally. On the one hand, scholars and scientists benefit considerably from the coordinate efforts among a variety of universities. On the other hand, teamwork among different companies exerts an undeniably far-reaching impact on their development. Generally speaking, if we were isolated from the society, we would feel desperate in the ruthless and relentless competition.

　　Accordingly, it is imperative for us to derive positive implications from the profound picture. For one thing, we should be educated and enlightened to enhance the awareness of cooperation. For another, we can take advantage of the advanced science and technology to help us work with others effectively and efficiently. It is in this way that we can make our society develop in a prosperous, harmonious and dynamic direction.

　　2009年：網(wǎng)絡(luò)的近與遠

　　天龍八部之壞事版

　　Apparently, the purpose of the sketch is to convince us that considerable emphasis has to be placed upon the issue of Internet communication, which is prevalent and pervasive in contemporary society. Nobody could have failed to notice the fact people in increasing numbers are addicted to the cyber world, for the reason that surfing on line can provide them with fascination and recreation. Regrettably, we are so obsessed with the virtual world that we almost turn a blind eye to the real interpersonal communication around us, which not only poses a potential and probable threat on our normal contact with other people, but also makes our life isolated. Generally speaking, hardly can we maintain physical and psychological health if we were deprived of social communication.

　　4句話。第一句點明主旨：網(wǎng)絡(luò)交流問題

　　第二句現(xiàn)狀+原因分析：很多人沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)世界，因為網(wǎng)絡(luò)的誘惑和娛樂。

　　第三句轉(zhuǎn)折+結(jié)果：我們太迷戀而忽視了人際交往，這樣對正常交流不好，也讓我們隔絕開來

　　第四句威脅性總結(jié)

　　三分天下之壞事版

　　Apparently, the purpose of the sketch is to convince us that considerable emphasis has to be placed upon the issue of Internet communication, which is prevalent and pervasive in contemporary society. This picture is thought-provoking, in that it contains the following three layers of meanings. Initially, nobody could have failed to notice the fact people in increasing numbers are addicted to the cyber world, for the reason that surfing on line can provide them with fascination and recreation. Additionally, we are so obsessed with the virtual world that we almost turn a blind eye to the real interpersonal communication around us. Finally, hardly can we maintain close contact with people, both individually and socially, if we fail to attach great importance to social communication.

　　5句話。第一句深刻含義

　　第二句過渡句

　　第三四五句分論點1，2，3

　　雙刃劍版

　　Apparently, the picture is a metaphor of a thought-provoking phenomenon: the Internet is a double-edged sword. (On the one hand)The past several years are accompanied by unprecedented development of the Internet, and people in mounting numbers are benefiting from its amazing convenience in communication. It can be aptly exemplified by the effective and efficient “chatting tools(softwares)” ranging from QQ to MSN. Regrettably(On the other hand), unable to resist the fascination and temptation of the cyber world, a great number of people fail to notice the importance of social activities and interpersonal communication. If we let the situation go as it is, the phenomenon would become unimaginable and uncontrollable/people would suffer from severe communication crisis.

　　5句話

　　第一句點明主旨雙刃劍。

　　第二句說明網(wǎng)絡(luò)發(fā)展對交流的好處--拉近我們的距離

　　第三句舉例說明好處(2，3兩句是正面描述)

　　第四句說明沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)缺乏交流的現(xiàn)狀

　　第五句威脅性說明網(wǎng)絡(luò)的壞處--拉遠了我們的距離(交流危機)(4，5兩句是反面描述)

　　三、建議措施段/評論看法段

　　1. 國家立法 2 人民教育/喚起意識 3 媒體宣傳 4. 自己做起 5. 自由發(fā)揮

　　Accordingly, it is imperative for us to derive positive implications from the profound picture. For one thing, we should be educated and enlightened to enhance the awareness of cooperation. For another, we can take advantage of the advanced science and technology to help us work with others effectively and efficiently. It is in this way that we can make our society prosperous, harmonious and vigorous.

　　四、舉例論證段(2001，2004，2007)

　　A case in point is the successful launching of “Shenzhou Ⅴ spacecraft” which sets Chinain a high position of aviation and space flight. Although it means a great achievement for us Chinese, we are facing new challenges in the future and need to do further research in space technology. Another illustration is closely related to us, the examinees. If we pass this test and are fortunately admitted by a university, we shall not stop making efforts. Instead, we are confronted with the challenge of conquering the difficult graduate courses. We still have to strive for success in our future academic study, employment and career. On the whole, these examples effectively clarify the saying that “Destination is another starting point.”

　　十大話題：

　　一.人口問題

　　二.西部大開發(fā)

　　三.網(wǎng)絡(luò)和雙刃劍(金錢，陽光)

　　四.成功，夢想和現(xiàn)實

　　五.職業(yè)選擇和規(guī)劃/高分低能

　　六.洋節(jié)和傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日

　　七.神七上天和嫦娥奔月

　　八.地震與愛心

　　九.奧運舉辦

　　十.抄襲與誠信

　　補充題目：偽劣商品;食品安全;抄襲與誠信;亂收費(因果：因：法律制度不完善，部分人只顧自己利益，忽視學生利益; 果：為社會，個人帶來不良后果和巨大壓力)節(jié)儉與壓力;心理問題;交通阻塞

　　從現(xiàn)狀(實際生活例子)，原因，結(jié)果(后果或者影響), 建議措施四大方向來分析

　　小作文部分

　　開門見山說意圖

　　咨詢建議一二三

　　不同內(nèi)容可分段

　　感謝客氣不可少

　　期待回信成慣例

　　2006年真題解析

　　You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.

　　Don't sign your own name...."Li Ming" instead. Don't write the address.

　　To whom it may concern,

　　I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Having conceived such a plan for a long period, I write this letter to request your help to recommend a candidate.

　　I wonder if it is convenient for you if two things concerning the child are taken into consideration. First, the child should come from Gui Zhou Province because I intend to help a child from my hometown. Second, it will be better if the child is a primary school student. Actually, I am good at teaching mathematics at elementary level.

　　My plan will be carried out as follows. First, I will remit at least 300 yuan in cash every month so as to reduce the financial burden of the family. More importantly, I decide to teach the child math and English in person during my summer vacation, which will surely be more beneficial to the child.

　　I really appreciate your help, and I look forward to your reply as soon as possible.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　感謝信

　　Directions:

　　Your delegation (代表團)has just returned from a visit to a university in Great Britain. And you were warmly treated there by Professor Herthwell. Please write a letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality and hope for further cooperation.

　　Dear Prof. Herthwell, (告訴了名字，又知道是教授，比較好這么稱呼)

　　I am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for your kind hospitality you showed to our delegation during our visit in your university.(寫信意圖：感謝對方的熱情招待)

　　I am indebted to your generous help to our visit. It was nice of you to introduce me to so many of your famous professors at your university. In addition, we appreciate the accommodation you provided for us. We had a fantastic time in Britain and will never forget it. (感激內(nèi)容：鑒于這是感謝信，內(nèi)容發(fā)生在過去，在這里套用I would be grateful if you would take …into consideration是不太合適的。用關(guān)聯(lián)詞1，2，3也顯得呆板。于是調(diào)整了一下，大意是：

　　我感激你的慷慨幫助。你介紹了很多教授給我認識。另外，(IN ADDITION，不用1，2，3了)，提供的住宿很好，我們很爽，絕對不會忘記)(注意時態(tài))

　　Meanwhile, I hope you will someday pay a short visit to our university and give us some lectures on “Modern Western Economics”. (這句是提綱要求 hope for further cooperation.不寫的話嚴重扣分) (或者I would be grateful if you would pay a short visit to our university)If you have interest in our university, please feel free to contact me for more information.

　　Yours Sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　段落句子分布詳情

　　1-4-2 總共7句，113字，已經(jīng)超綱

　　詢問信

　　Directions: You want to study at a certain foreign university. Write a letter to ask about the situation there as regards what qualifications one needs for acceptance, fees, possible scholarships, and accommodation.

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.

　　First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I have already had a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation?

　　I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　推薦信

　　To whom it may concern,

　　As the director of Philosophy Department, I am writing to you to recommend one of my best friends, Mark. Eros, to your distinguished department.

　　I would be grateful if you would be interested to know his details via this letter. Firstly, …What’s more….Last but not least……

　　Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate for your position. If you have any questions concerning his background, please feel free to contact me for more information.

　　備忘錄/報告(MEMO)：備忘錄在本質(zhì)上也是書信，一般是寫給同事的一種正式而簡短的信，常常是有關(guān)工作事宜等。它的主體部分和書信幾乎一樣，只是省略其中的禮貌結(jié)尾。同時，MEMO不需要結(jié)束語和簽名。(但結(jié)尾可以寫If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me for more information.)

　　寫作格式：

　　Date: 日期 如September 12, 2001

　　To：收件人

　　From: 發(fā)件人

　　Subject：事由，如Faculty Meeting

　　范文：Directions:

　　You are an active member of the student newspaper. The newspaper is currently looking for a journalist for the summer semester. Write a memo that will appear in the newspaper next week describing the position available.

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　提綱分析：沒有具體的提綱要求，中間完全自己發(fā)揮。

　　P1：寫作目的：招人

　　P2：具體細節(jié)：展開2-3點。三點比較好，每點一句即可�？梢詮囊韵路矫嬲归_：

　　1)招聘條件 2)上班時間 3)工作任務(wù) 4)薪水待遇 5)培訓機會

　　Date: August 10, 2004

　　To: All students

　　From: Li Ming

　　Subject: Journalist Position Available for the Summer Semester

　　On behalf of the students newspaper, I am writing this MEMO to inform you that we are going to recruit a new staff. And the details are listed as follows.(寫作意圖/寫此MEMO的目的)(2句，30字)

　　Firstly, Applicants should currently be studying at the university, and should preferably have at least two years’ writing experience. Secondly, the successful applicant will be expected to write two articles every week on happenings in the city and on campus. Finally, the position will commence at the end of May and will last through to the end of August. (3句，59字)

　　If you are interested, please send your resume to the campus newspaper office. (OR: If you have any questions concerning the position/application, please feel free to contact me for more information.)(1句，13字)

　　公告/告示

　　1.標題(Announcement或者具體活動)放中間

　　2.寫作日期位于標題下一行，右頂格

　　3.無須稱呼結(jié)尾禮貌語，但可以寫If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me for more information. 而且要署名，一般是機構(gòu)，題目會告之

　　Your university, Xinhua University, is going to celebrate its 60th anniversary. Write an announcement which covers the following information.

　　1) opening and closing dates of the celebrations,

　　2) celebration activities,

　　3) an invitation to all the past students, and

　　4) ways to contact .

　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the announcement. Use Xinhua University at the end of the announcement. You should write about 100 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (10 points)

　　提綱分析：

　　P1：公告/活動目的

　　P2： 活動細節(jié) 1。時間(提綱1)2。活動(提綱2)(比較好自己再發(fā)揮一點)

　　P3：邀請+聯(lián)系(提綱3，4)

　　Announcement

　　January 19, 2008

　　A month-long anniversary celebration will be held at Xinhua University, to salute its 60th anniversary. And the details of the activity are listed as follows.

　　Firstly, it will start/commence from September 16th, 2005 and continue to October. 15th, 2005. Secondly, seminars, cultural and athletic sports activities, and many other programs are planned to mark this glorious occasion of the university. Finally, our mayor will be present to make a speech too.

　　Hereby(特此，很經(jīng)典) we sincerely invite all our alumni to be present to share these happiest hours of the school. If you have any questions, you are most welcome to contact us at 010-89766789 or email us at [email protected]. (OR: If you have any questions, you are most welcome to contact us for more information.)

　　Xinhua University

　　總結(jié)：不管如何，MEMO和公告的共同點是：

　　P1：活動/事件目的+And the details of the activity are listed as follows.

　　P2：細節(jié)的安排 改寫提綱+合理擴展 寫三點

　　P3：問題聯(lián)系方式If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me for more information.